PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
“OK, stay still while I count,” squawked Cyril bossily “1, 2, 3… 16, 17, who’s moved?” he screeched agitated. He flew back to the beginning. “1, 2… 20, 21. Who’s missing?”
The birds all began twittering at once.
“It’s Bert,” said one.
“It’s Shirley,” said another.
“I’m here,” chorused Bert and Shirley together.
“It’s Fenella AGAIN. Always Fenella!”
With a flamboyant flap of wings she landed.
“Sorry, I got distracted,” chirped Fenella preening her feathers.
“Fenella, you must take this seriously, we have a long way to fly south and can’t keep stopping because some passing male takes your fancy.”
Word Count:100
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
Dear Clare,
Clearly fluttery females fly a-fowl. Yeah, it was hard to resist, so I didn’t. 😉 Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle – it reminded me of a TV advert from years ago!
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Haha that was cute, and her name had to be fenella 🙂
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Thank you. I’m pleased you liked it. 🙂
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Hahaha this was such fun to read! Made me smile. Love how you’ve personified the pigeons 🙂
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Thank you very much:)
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ooooh smiling I am! Love this and especially the spirit of Fenella! 🙂 Love’s always around the corner and when flying as a group, it’s hard to get away!
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Thank you – I appreciate your comment. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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I was smiling throughout – this was s charming, light-hearted tale! Fun!
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Thanks for reading it. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.
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My pleasure! 🙂
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Very good. Loads of chuckles. Where did you get the name Fenella? 🙂
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Funnily enough it was on a quiz show on TV recently! 🙂
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I just like where you took this. Mike
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked it.
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Sweet. Fenella is a great name for a bird.
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Thanks. She had to have a more fanciful name than the others!
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This is written with great spirit and voice! I mean, quite literally. I could hear the squawking Cyril, the chorus of Bert and Shirley … and LOL @ Fenella. These are great characters personified in a delightful story. Well done 😀
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Thank you for such a lovely comment 🙂
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Ha, I love it.. There is always one who doesn’t know about priorities…
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Thanks and it had to be a female!
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Woohoo! Cutely cute!!!!!!
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Thanks for reading it 🙂
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Tsk, Fenella, migration is a serious business… I love this, smiles all around.
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Thanks for reading it 🙂
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