Thanks to Piya Singh for this week’s photo prompt.
As they strolled along the path, with the tinkling of the water flowing over the rocks whilst breathing in the fresh fragrances of the valley, Jane felt an overwhelming sense of well-being and happiness.
They reached an incline in the river and watched awestruck as the salmon leapt upstream to spawn. They held hands, contented with the lack of conversation as they marvelled at the spectacle of nature.
She wished she could freeze this moment so that she could return to it whenever she chose.
Seldom in life, does one feel pure joy, but this was one of those occasions.
Word Count: 100
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
A lovely word picture. You might want to change spectacles to spectacle, so that it doesn’t sound like you’re talking about eye glasses
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Thanks Neil – duly edited! 🙂
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Dear Clare,
There’s nothing better than sharing companionable silence with a special someone in moments like those. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle. It was a bit of a rush job today, but I wanted something without an unpleasant ending this week!
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An idyllic moment captured.
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Thanks Sandra.
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I liked this. If only everyone could keep and recall such memories, then perhaps the world would be a better place.
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Thank you Mike. If people could only be content with what they have and let others live their lives how they choose, it would definitely be a better place. Appreciating the simple things life has to offer can bring great happiness and contentment.
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What a lovely image and atmosphere you’ve conjued here. We could almost be standing beside them. Lovely story
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Thank you very much.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Indeed it is very rare to feel such joy as you aptly described.
🙂
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Thank you. I appreciate you reading and commenting. 🙂
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I think I can remember such occasions.. and it has often involved being in the proximity of such a place.
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I can remember seeing fish leaping upstream in Devon, England many years ago and standing in wonderment watching them.
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Beautiful word picture of an idyllic moment!
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Thanks. I’m glad you liked it.
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A tranquil, beautiful scene evoked skillfully. Well-done!
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Thanks for such a lovely comment 🙂
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You’re most welcome!
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Nice moment, brilliantly captured. Hope you have many of them. 🙂
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Thank you! I am confident that I will 🙂
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This photo prompt has (for reasons I can’t explain) inspired a number of dark stories. It’s so refreshing to read yours. I feel cleansed and tranquil again. Thank you for that. 🙂
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That’s a lovely comment to receive! Thank you. 🙂
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If you’re ever interested, it would be wonderful to have you join us at our writers forum: The Writer’s Den. Stop by and take a look if you want.
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Thanks very much, I will take a look.
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I think she’s found her “happy place.” If she can freeze frame it mentally, she can return to it again and again, although it’s not quite the same as being there. A refreshing story, Clare.
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That’s true. Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
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“She wished she could freeze this moment so that she could return to it whenever she chose.”
~Sigh. If only we could do this…
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Wouldn’t that be good to have as a super power? 🙂 Thanks for reading and commenting.
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I love tales of JoY!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Everyone needs memories of moments like this, they get you through bad times. Beautiful and peaceful story.
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Thanks very much
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A happy place in more ways than one. Lovely evocative story, well done Clare.
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Thanks Dee. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
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