PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
“I can’t walk in this ensemble let alone descend stairs elegantly.” The whalebone corset was fastened so tightly, Elizabeth could hardly breathe.
“Hold your head high and compose yourself,” her mother tutored. “Your future husband could be among the suitors downstairs. You need to impress so you can choose from them, rather than having to accept the only request for your hand.”
“I am aware of the importance, mother,” she retorted. Not having a large dowry on offer, she had to use her other assets to full advantage.
Elizabeth summoned her courage, breathed in deeply and took her first step.
Word Count: 100
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
Ah, yes. Echoes of the Old South back in America’s Civil War Days. In some round about way, that tradition is still practiced, kind of, anymore. Pretty cool story you have, Clare.
Five out of five hoop skirts.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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I wonder it I myself would choose her because of the way she could descend stairs would be the best selection criterium… hmm
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No, I agree, but in days gone by things were very different. 🙂
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A shame that still to this day women need to “suck it in” to get anywhere – equal pay, equal jobs, an equal relationship.
Randy
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Thankfully things are better than the period in which this was written, but you are right. Sometimes though women want equal pay when they don’t do an equal job – tennis for example: they only play three sets whereas men play five, but the women want equal prize money!
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Makes me wonder how many times this may have actually occurred in the past. Very Well Done 🙂
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Thanks for such a lovely comment, Morgan. 🙂
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Thanks for the Lovely Read 🙂
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Can’t get the image of these “other assets” from my mind. Hope they did the trick 🙂
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Ha, ha! Glad you liked it. 🙂
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Excellent. This was my first thought from the prompt, but I couldn’t figure out where to go with it. You did it better than I could have!
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Thank you very much. I wanted to do something historical as the stairway looked so grand!
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I hope she finds true love!
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I don’t know if they often married for true love in those days!
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Perhaps that was wise…
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I LOVE this. Gorgeously done, and I wonder who she ends up with! If this were the beginning of a novel, I would definitely keep reading!
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Thank you so much. That’s a lovely comment to receive! 🙂
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Let’s hope her other assets are acceptable.
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A girl’s gotta have some allure, as it isn’t money…!
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Dear Clare,
The ridiculous things women had to go through to snag a husband. I”m not sure which was worse, corsets in the West or bound feet in China. I hope Elizabeth didn’t faint on the way down the steps. Well written story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. Much appreciated. 🙂
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This reminds me of a conversation in Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, where the women matter-of-factly discuss why and how to catch a husband. And these were noblewomen. The poor had to work hard and find a husband. Great story.
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Thanks Gabi. They were very different times!
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So glad I live in present times….I would be a disaster in corset and huge dress. Poor girls back then, imagine to live and dream in those constricted times. You captured it excellently.
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Thanks very much. I find present day underwear uncomfortable enough! I think I would have rebelled and gone corset-less if I had lived in those times. 🙂
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Right there with you! 😀
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The pressure on girls back then to look the part and bring in some money. Glad we don’t have to wear corsets any longer. Nicely done.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Thanks very much. Difficult to be a noblewoman in those days, but even harder being a servant or pauper!
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This is brilliantly written in a classical style fitting to the period. It reminded me of Jane Austen as well. Suitors, corsets and dowries, very evocative.
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This is brilliantly evocative of the time, corsets, suitors and dowries. It reminded me of Jane Austen too. Well written.
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Thank you very much! I’m just glad we don’t have to wear corsets still!
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You offered us a fine historical picture of fashionable society. Whale bone or steel corsets must have been miserable to wear.
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Thank you – glad you liked it.
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I’m holding out for the chubby girl with the big dowry.
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Ha ha. I’m sure many men married for the dowry!
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It wasn’t me. I married a poor girl, but she was gorgeous.
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A sad comment on how women prioritize marriage as the panacea for all of life. I advise girls whom I mentor to keep living life the way God wants them to and made them for. A husband can always be part of His plan and not the end of it!
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It still seems to be the only goal for many young girls!
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That too in this age! Blahah!
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I wonder sometimes whether having a choice makes any difference to the happiness or otherwise of a marriage – look at the divorce statistics!
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Agreed! Some of the arranged marriages last longer and seem happier than those where there has been a choice. I wouldn’t want to risk it though!
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I’ve often thought those whalebone corsets were a curse! And to rely on them to “get the guy” is insult upon injury. Great take on the prompt.
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Thanks Alicia. 🙂
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When we are young, attraction is always the first glance; a timely story, at any time.
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Thank you Dawn 🙂
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A young woman couldn’t live alone and be independent in those old days as they needed someone to help the with the corset strings. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne. I’m glad I didn’t live during that era.
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