© Sandra Crook
Shaking his head, Bill sucked in air; a typical response of many tradespeople.
“It’s tricky. We’ll have to support the roof, while putting the pillar in. Won’t be cheap, but it’ll work.”
For five days, Bill and his apprentice worked to support the ceiling. Arriving late, finishing early, they didn’t think tea breaks of half an hour several times a day were unreasonable.
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“IN KEEPING, I said! It couldn’t look more out of place! It might as well be painted sky blue pink with lime stripes!” yelled the furious café owner.
“It’ll be another £200 for a fancy paint job.”
Word Count: 100
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
Hehehe, that pillar struck me as out of place, too! Excellent take on the photo prompt. 🙂
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it.
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Dear Clare,
The last line made me laugh out loud. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. Always nice to know you have made someone laugh 🙂
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Hmm, sounds familiar 🙂 It’s funny because it’s true!
Nice one.
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Thanks Draliman. Inspired by a recent experience!
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Yep, sounds like a lot of workmen I’ve had the pleasure of doing business with… Very funny take, well done.
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Thanks Iain. Everybody knows a tradesman like it!
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Brilliant! I loved the way you picked out that particular feature from the photo prompt. A great story.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Great take on the photo, I hadn’t thought of it that way.
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Thanks Sandra. The pillar just stood out to me!
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Ha.. yes there are two ways to grow business, either make your customer happy or make him dissatisfied…
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Thanks Bjorn. We have too many tradespeople who squeeze as much money out of a job as they can!
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Ha ha-very good!
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Thanks Louise. Glad you liked it.
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Horrible work ethics rarely pay off. Love the way you captured those of BODGETT & SCARPER.
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Thanks Alicia. I’m sure there are plenty of great tradesmen out there. Finding them among the less ethical can be challenging when you don’t have anyone recommended!
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You don’t always get what you pay for! And with workers like this, there’s probably not much hope of a fix with Bodgett & Scarper!
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I don’t think I would want to employ them! Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Oh, brother! It’s always something, isn’t it? Well, if 500 pounds is what they think it’s worth …
Funny ending and swell story, Clare!
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Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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Fun stuff!
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Next time…blue prints and a contract!
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Ha ha – that would be sensible!
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Now that you mention it… that pillar does look way out of place! Fun take!
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Thanks Dale. Every time I looked at it, it seemed out of place!
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